The spanking contract part 1

[kaylex]

I'm with kate on this. If it were a husband/wife scenario i would be more comfortable, the nudity and children theme doesn't work for me.

[sicko26us]

So what is the verdict? Do I write more or not?

[Redskinluver]

Is this a fantasy?

If it is real,sounds like child abuse to me. Fully agree with Kate.

[sicko26us]

Originally Posted by Redskinluver

Is this a fantasy?

If it is real,sounds like child abuse to me. Fully agree with Kate.

It is 90% fantasy, the only real parts is I have a sister who is two years younger and my mom remaried. Neither me or my sister were spanked in real life.

I attempted to make the story as realistic as possible, maybe I did too good of a job if you guys are getting upset about it.

[Kate]

Yes we are, but it's only because one small part crossed the line that is not ok even in fantasy. Just call it an "oops" and take it from there. Some things just aren't ok. I don't hold anything personal against you. Keep writing. Keep posting

[sicko26us]

Originally Posted by Kate

Yes we are, but it's only because one small part crossed the line that is not ok even in fantasy. Just call it an "oops" and take it from there. Some things just aren't ok. I don't hold anything personal against you. Keep writing. Keep posting

Thanks for being understanding, and I can definetly fix this but I need to know exactly where the line is so in future stories and can get as close as possible without crossing it. Where did I go wrong? Was it the M/F fully nude part? Or was it just the complete nudity that is unacceptable? Here are a few questions I need answered before I can write more.

Would the Level three spanking be acceptable if the same sex parent gave the spanking M/M or F/F? Like is suggested in part two.

If the answer to the above no, can I have the spankee drop there underwear for a bare bottom level two?

[Kate]

Nothing wrong with nude when it's adults. Nude child/adolescent, anything remotely resembling that crosses the lines. Nudity between adults--ok. Adolescent bare ass--I guess you can consider okay on the site. I think anything else crosses an unacceptable line. Some stories here have teens getting bare bum spankings. I guess you can ask for feedback from someone else since my stories are mostly adult--and sometimes get a little rough.

[sarah thorne]

I am one who does not have a problem with parental spanking in stories.

However, I believe that nude spanking of adolescents (or even children) is actually unrealistic. Furthering this theory, they have their legs spread wide apart while being spanked, which adds a sexual connotation to it. So, if you're going for realistic parental discipline, I would recommend taking that out of the story.

Otherwise, I actually like the theme.

sarah

[CaliSpanker]

Not a fan of the nudity stuff in childhood discipline...or the showle step-parent as physical disciplinarian. But that is on a personal level, As a writer I hate to see anyone limited on creative expression so maybe it's just a case of understanding the audience.

Like the style just not a fan of the content.

i like all your storie great job.
reminds me of some of my younger days