As someone somewhat into ageplay/roleplay herself, to me this did not smack of that. I guess if there had been a disclaimer stating such (you know, "the girl in this story is not really a girl or my niece, but an adult woman assuming the role as such for play" or whatever), perhaps but there's not.
Incestuous contact is what squicked me. An uncle and niece practically being aroused by one another....guess it happens. Not sure if it should be promoted, so to speak, without the age being clear. I agree tho, a "teen" can be 18 or 19.
Perhaps asking for an edit actually citing the age in this and subsequent stories that may come along?
sarah
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